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Feedback Sample

A 3,000-word mini manuscript evaluation provides a comprehensive, big-picture review of your manuscript. I assess your book’s structure, plot, character development, pacing, and overall impact, delivering a detailed report with actionable feedback to elevate your story.

What it includes

  • A thorough analysis (based on a 3,000-word sample) of narrative elements (plot, characters, pacing, themes, and style).
  • A written report (3–5 pages) with strengths, areas for improvement, and specific suggestions.
  • Optional follow-up consultation to discuss feedback (if requested).

Benefits for authors

  • Gain clarity on your manuscript’s strengths and weaknesses.
  • Receive expert insights to refine your story before deeper editing.
  • Build confidence to revise with clear, constructive feedback tailored to your goals.

What it doesn't include

  • Line-by-line editing or corrections for grammar, spelling, or punctuation.
  • Rewriting or restructuring of the manuscript.
  • Formatting or publishing guidance.

Interested?

  • Get in touch via the form here or the email address above.
  • There is a fixed price of £40. Please note that the free sample edit is a different service and covers inline editing and proofreading, not manuscript evaluation. 

Feedback Sample FAQs

What exactly is a feedback sample, and how does it differ from other types ofediting?

Based on a 3,000-word sample, I take a broad, big-picture assessment of your work. I’ll read your sample and provide a detailed report covering areas such as structure, pacing, plot or argument development, characterisation (if applicable), tone, style, and overall coherence.

Unlike other types of editing, I don’t make changes to the text itself – instead, I offer constructive feedback and suggestions to help you strengthen your manuscript before you move on to line editing or copyediting.

Is a feedback sample suitable for early drafts?

Yes – this is often the ideal stage. A manuscript evaluation can highlight key areas to focus on before you spend time polishing language or fine-tuning details. Whether you're uncertain about the structure, need guidance on the manuscript's direction, or want to know how it reads to a critical eye, an evaluation can offer clear next steps.

Will I receive comments on the manuscript itself, or just a report?

My evaluation includes a thorough editorial report – typically 3–5 pages depending on the manuscript length and complexity. This outlines what’s working well and what could be improved, with practical suggestions.

I may also provide light annotations within the manuscript to illustrate particular points – but the primary feedback comes in the report itself.